Thursday, May 31, 2007

Loser

It felt like hell.
She felt nothing in her life was going well.
At first it was a friend she lost.
That broke her some.
Then it was a most prized possession.
That broke her more.
The tears were unstoppable.
It hurt to let things get away.
It hurt to lose.
It hurt to live with 'without'.
Why? - was the only question.
Answers there were none.
It was her granny who consoled her
"I know how it feels, honey
You're beginning life now.
I have lived it thru.
Believe me, there's more.
But, my girl, be strong.
Your life will go on,No matter what."
The words and the love
lit a spark in her.
She's ready to lose more.
And she did.
But it didn't hurt as much.

4 comments:

Bala said...

The tears were unstoppable.
It hurt to let things get away.
It hurt to lose.
It hurt to live with 'without'.
Why? - was the only question.
Answers there were none.

Yeah..Very True..

Hameeduddin said...

Now, theres a nice post .... Simple and true....
Keep writing

Girl of Destiny said...

well thnx shah! how about the same advice for you? ;-) don't seem to find any new posts there...?

Hameeduddin said...

Now u wud.... :) and wheres urs?