Thursday, July 13, 2006

A Trip to the Surface

It was the day that Shiko the fish has been eagerly waiting for. After a long time he and his wife Rayno are expecting a baby fish. Shiko was waiting nervously outside the anemone cluster. Inside the cluster was Rayno and the baby will hatch any moment!
After what seemed like ages, Shiko heard the soft voice of Rayno calling her husband in. Shiko rushed in and saw the most beautiful little baby fish ever.
"Shiko, darling, it's a girl" said Rayno.
Shiko didn't say anything. He couldn't.
He gently nudged the baby with his fin.
Rayno said "Shiko, our baby was born on Full moon day. I'd like her to be called Luna".
Shiko nodded his head and said "That's a lovely name, baby. Luna it is. Our Luna. Our Little Princess".
Days passed by. Luna was almost 2 weeks old and she was learning to go out of her anemone cluster. But her doting parents never let her go out of their sight even for a moment.
Luna had heard about the wonders of the big ocean from the Old Crab who lived in retirement in the next cluster. She wanted to see for herself the many treasures of the sea and something they called the 'sky'.
But Shiko and Rayno kept telling her it wasn't time yet for her to venture out so far.
But after continuous requests, they agreed to take her out near the surface.
Luna was so excited to be going! Atlast she was going to see the 'sky'!
Shiko, Rayno and Luna swam all the way up and reached the surface.
Luna could not look enough! Shiko showed her the great big bright blue thing up there and told her that was the 'sky'.
"And look Luna, those white fluffy things are called Clouds" said Shiko.
"What is that daddy", asked Luna.
"Which one?", enquired Shiko.
"That long white thing moving among the clouds", pointed Luna.
"Oh that looks like a shooting star. You can see the trail it's leaving behind" said Shiko.
"Shiko dear, I don't think that's a shooting star...", said Rayno.
At that very moment the long white thing burst into many pieces.
"Hey I know, that's fireworks!" exclaimed Shiko.
"Oh daddy, it's so scary" said Luna.
The pieces were coming very fast towards them. And when they fell in the water they created such a big splash that for a moment all three lost sight of each other. Luna felt the water turning hot where the pieces had fallen. She could not see her mother or father. She called out to her parents but no answering voice came back to her.
It was a lone little lost voice calling out to the parents who will never answer back.
An announcer's voice from a radio in a passing fisherman's boat spewed out the news "GSLV crashes into the sea", which made no sense at all to the forlorn little Luna.

9 comments:

Nivi said...

hey wonderful!!!! really nice.....

Initially i thought u wer talkin bout finding nemo. Later, thought u wer talkin bout a dream... I dint expect this amazing climax.

U better start writing thrillers...
I ll be ur ardent follower :)

Girl of Destiny said...

ooooooh!!
thnk u so much babe!

Bala said...

felt i was inside SREE watchin a movie from DISNEY films.. good one indeed !

But nivi's final remarks were bit too much !

:->

Girl of Destiny said...

come on goof...don't be so jealous! ;)
Anyway, glad u like it.

Girl of Destiny said...

sona, I never thought that way. All I thought was something which may be very important to one set of people may not even be significant to another set. What's an "advancement in science" for us humans is "just another long white thing" for the fishes.
Luna is a little baby fish and no more. :-)

Hameeduddin said...

very sweet indeed. Does Luna also mean 'Mathi'? Or is mathi just brains and no moon?

Girl of Destiny said...

whoa!!
i never connected Luna to Mathi until now!
Thnx for the suggestion Shah!
:)
P.S Mathi = brains = moon. Always!

insane dame said...

nice one da.. unexpected climax.. really...

Girl of Destiny said...

thnx dame! :-)