My cousin and I were excited. Our little cousins were visiting us and it spelled fun with the family! Little GG, this cute nine-year-old is telling us a story she had made up. All of a sudden, she tells a poem she had made up in school. "It's called Green". We're amazed. "Oh, I wrote a Limerick too". Follows 'Red'. "And a Haiku". It was 'Blue' now.
We plead for more.
And what followed was..
Green
Green is the joy of nature
Green is the whistling of grass
Green is nice bright happiness
Green is the surprise of breaking glass
Green is a cucumber, smooth and soft
Green is fresh apples sitting in the loft
Green is vines swinging to and fro
Green makes me happy like a frolicking doe
Green is the joy of nature
Red (a limerick)
Terrible, terrible red,
A battlefield with bloodshed
I hear a loud rumble
Of a castle going to crumble
So I ran home to my bed
Blue (a haiku)
Deep loyal and dark
As beautiful as a lark
Sea with a giant shark
5 W’s
Who? The green grass
What? Whistles quietly
When? In the afternoon
Where? At the meadow
Why? Because of the wind
Purple (a couplet)
Purple, purple magical and deep
Eggplant that’s good to eat
Purple is the sister of pink
They have a very close link
Purple is the sign of love
As lovely as a white dove
"Hey GG, how about I give you a topic and you write something on it?" I ask her. "Ok" she says matter of factly. "Give her something out of the ordinary. I want to see how deep her thinking goes", my cousin tells me. "Oh I've already written a deep poem. I got it while looking at a fan", pipes up GG. She rattles out 'Life'.
Life
Life goes spinning at a pace
Life goes spinning in your face
Life goes spinning round and round
Until you fly and never touch the ground
Pretend you’re a fledgling learning to fly
Upto a point that’s high
If you miss a flap or two
You’ll fall down and that isn’t cool
Pretend you’re building a bridge
With a tall pointed ridge
If you miss a brick or so
It’ll fall down and you’ll have a row
Life goes spinning at a pace
Life goes spinning in your face
Life goes spinning round and round
Until you fly and never touch the ground
It took us time to close our awestruck mouths. I finally give her the topic 'Morning'.
Morning
The flowers are opening their petals
The sun is rising on a new day
The dew drops are splashing on the grass
I could shout hooray
Hooray, hooray it’s morning
A few flowers are opening last
Hooray, hooray it’s morning
I can see a mast
The flowers are opening their petals
The sun is rising on a new day
The dewdrops are splashing on the grass
I could shout hooray
India
I like India a lot
Even though it’s hot
I have family there
I know they care
India is very nice
I’ll be there in a trice
4 comments:
hey mat.. i wanna c tht kid.. enna idhu?? i still cant beleive it... (-: (-:
superb a iruku... wher is she studying?
awesome...
i have no words mat.... my mouths wide open... :o
yes...i'm still awestruck! :-) She IS unbelievable!
niv...why is ur smiley upside down?
chumma.. style ku (-:
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